With this package, I will review one draft of your TV pilot script and provide either written or verbal feedback focused on story structure, character transformation, emotional truth, theme, and overall execution.

This package includes:

• A professional review of one draft of your TV pilot script
• Written or verbal feedback tailored to your project
• One private consultation meeting (up to 60 minutes) to discuss notes, questions, and next steps
• A recording of our consultation session for future reference
• Enrollment in the Fall session of The Story of Transformation
• Access to two live story trainings on November 9th and November 16th
• The opportunity to learn transformational storytelling principles and apply them directly to your pilot

Whether you're preparing your pilot for submission, rewriting a draft, or looking to strengthen your character arcs and emotional impact, this package provides both personalized guidance and practical tools to help you elevate your story.